A Twist In The End

On a normal day, in America on planet Earth, there was a gun factory. It sold all sorts. But one day one their machines broke…

One day, when the bullets were being made, one of the revolver making machines went wrong. It started creating twisted revolvers. They had twisted handles, twisted triggers and twisted barrels! No one knew what was happening. Everyone wanted to find out about the strange appearances of the revolvers. Suddenly, the factory lights started flashing and machines stopped. They called in some engineers eventually.

After three hours, the machines were fixed and all was well. The  kept one revolver in a museum.

One thought on “A Twist In The End”

  1. Hi James,

    I’m from the University of Roehampton and I really loved reading your blog! I particularly enjoyed how descriptive you were and your use of punctuation. I’d love to know more about this gun factory. Sometimes it can be useful to read through your words after you have finished writing. It can be helpful to check spelling or to check if you have missed anything. Something to think about but keep up the good work!

    Sophie 🙂

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