The Beautiful Flowers Explosion

On Friday, I was in France  and I am going to be going to pick some flowers from the garden. I found some beautiful orange, autumn roses. I picked them up and they were so pretty that I put them on the top of my window sill and when I went downstairs there was a bang and a smash. And the glass vahlse broke into pieces my mum was very mad at me,  “ahhhhhhhhhh,” she screamed and then I got grounded for a month. ??

2 thoughts on “The Beautiful Flowers Explosion”

  1. Nice job Nika! I liked how you talked about flowers,which you probably are interested in. In the beginning I noticed your sentence did not make that much sense, but I’m sure you can fix it. Keep writing!

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