The Best Bonfire Night… Ever!

Once upon a time there was a boy called Adam. He liked to have fireworks! (well now he does but he didn’t when he was baby.) So anyway he is going to celebrate fireworks soon so Adam is going to have lots of fun (hopefully). He will have sparklers and magical fireworks. The first firework was white and was in-between a red one and a blue one they all were ended with a couple of flames. The whole thing was fantastic and everyone was very happy ,also it is his Mum’s birthday tomorrow which is brilliant. Adam had her present under┬áhis bed they were going swimming as well as that! Adam went to sleep happy on top of his comfy bed.

4 thoughts on “The Best Bonfire Night… Ever!”

  1. Dear Adam,
    I like how you used yourself to be the character in the story. Your creativity was also very appearant in this writing piece. Good Job!

  2. Nice job Adam! Your story was for sure a good one. I really liked how you made this sound like an actual story and not just putting words where they could go. That sounds like a fun day you wrote about!

  3. I really enjoyed reading your blog this week. Good job describing the fireworks. I could really picture them in my head. Great Job!

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