Camping!

On Monday to Sunday, We went camping in a forest and it was really fun. When we arrived  it was about 9:30 in the morning. we were there with Katrina, Natalia and their Dad Steve. My Mum, Dad, Sister (Sienna) and finally my brother (Ben).After Dinner me and Katrina had smores and it was the first time I had one. When we went to bed it was about 9 or 10 in the evening. Then about 30 minutes later we all heard two foxes and calling for each other. In the morning, me and Ben woke up first so I went in his tent. Ben whispered “in the middle of the night a deer or something hit my head”. While I was just sitting there laughing my head of.

2 thoughts on “Camping!”

  1. Dear Amelia,

    Was it your first time to try s’mores? Were they good? I’ve never tried one before. It seems like you had a fun time camping. Were you guys camping near a lake? Your story was well-written, and you only had a few capitalization and punctuation errors. Good job!

    Check out my post on Week 17- Safari

    Sincerely,
    Melissa

  2. Hi Amelia,
    I like all of the details that you added. Something that I can connect to you and some facts about your story I can give you are that I have also went camping. Something that you should think about is does it really have to do with a hand on a church ? bye ! HAPPY WRITING ! from Aubrey in Illinois.

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