Hi my name is bob I’m on my way home and suddenly a car smashed into the wall and spun into another car and there was a lot of smoke I was there from one hour suddenly the smoke cleared. The cars are cleared and I’m back on my way home again. I’m at home. My mum ask me why I took so long and I said I was a long and I ran up to my bed and had a rest and then I had diner and then I ran up to my bed and played on my Ipad

2 thoughts on “CRASH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!”

  1. Hi Joe
    I can easily see how you were inspired by the prompt, there would definitely be a lot of smoke after the accident you have described. I wondered why you didn’t tell your mum what had happened at the end.

    Miss T
    Hampshire, England

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