Creepy woods

Whilst I was walking though the scary, worrying creepy woods.Just then, it starred to rain I was I in trobble  so I ran back home .Sudenly I  lost my way home and it really started to rain  I got my phone out of my pocket and I had no servise I was thinking in my head what am I going to do and then things just got a lot worse.My phone ran out of charge and my mum was wondering where I was . Then it stopped raining so I cared on walking then I came to a place that has four ways to go and I chanced it and went right .Next the was a big mantion my heart was pownging so fast and I closed my eyes and I was home it was like a mystery .

3 thoughts on “Creepy woods”

  1. I like your use of descriptive words Poppy. In places, your writing does not flow as well as it could. Before submitting, re-read to check your writing. Mr. m.

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