The Day The Bear Yo Yo’s Quit

Yesterday, a girl called Natalie got home from school and went into her sweetie cupboard to get a bear yo yo. Natalie saw a pile of letters so she picked them up and bought them to her room to read them.

Hey Natalie. Strawberry bear yo yo here. Please could you tell all of the other flavours that they are useless as you always have me as a snack. You are so kind for always having me as a snack.                                                                                 Your dear friend strawberry bear yo yo.

Hello Natalie. Blackcurrant bear yo yo here. Tell your brother that he is so kind for having me as a snack. Also one more favour, please could you tell apple bear yo yo and pineapple bear yo yo to stop fighting about who you will try next. They will not talk to each other and it is driving the rest of us crazy.                                                                                                                       Blackcurrant bear yo yo out! (Also do you want to hear my song? Blackcurrant is the best flavour ever. BOOM!)

Sup Natalie. Pineapple bear yo yo here. I know that you will try me next as you have said in the store that the flavour apple is disgusting. And could you please tell apple bear yo yo that I’m better than him.                                                    The flavour you are going to try next pineapple bear yo yo.

What is the matter with you Natalie. It is apple bear yo yo speaking to you now. Please can you tell pineapple bear yo yo that you are  going to try me next. I would tell him myself but we are no longer speaking.                                     The flavour that you are going to try next apple bear yo yo.

After those letters Natalie felt sorry and decided to try them all. It was a good thing that she tried them all as she didn’t get another letter back. She was happy now. Natalie told her teacher and she got a well done sticker.

And a gold star for trying different things!

 

 

2 thoughts on “The Day The Bear Yo Yo’s Quit”

  1. Wonderful job, Natalie! Your story was very creative and imaginative. I especially liked how you wrote from the perspectives of flavored bear yo yo’s, because it made the plot exciting and fun! Keep blogging!

  2. Hi Natalie, that was such a good story and I loved every second of it. Keep bloging.

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