The Day I was in charge

On a Friday morning the teacher wasn’t here but the teaching assistant was here so she choose a child to be the teacher for the day I was really excited.But right now its a thursday night I have to go to bed now bye .While I was sleeping I was dreaming  but what if I was in charge? I was dreaming .The next day at  7:30am I woke up and went to school hoping that she would choose me to be the teacher today i’m very nervous.The teacher of the day is Chloe said the teaching assistant. Yay its me I have been choosen finally.

5 thoughts on “The Day I was in charge”

  1. Hi Amelia,
    Great story! I can imagine I would be really excited if I was still at school and I was made teacher for the day. Having had some experience working in a school I can tell you while it can be very rewarding there is a lot of responsibility and at times it can be difficult. Teacher’s work very hard. I like the way you included details like the time and day. It helped set the scene. Keep up the good work.
    Michael (Team 100wc), Warwick, UK.

  2. Good job! I like the fact that your story ended happy, since you became helper. You added detail in putting the time in the morning instead of just writing in the morning. Keep up the good work!

    1. Hi Allie, I saw this comment late again but still thank you for taking time and commenting on this post !!

  3. Hi Amelia, great story! Me too I’ll I wish I could be the teacher assistant, I liked the way you put I had a dream that I will become a teacher or a teacher assistant. You could improve on your spaces and your nouns…well you got some nouns in there. But fantastic story!

    Well Done Amelia D!

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