Disappointing but positive

In the beginning I was disappointed but I bet I can think of a positive . It was raining so we could not go to the park but at leased I could play with my new bord game. When it was to late to go shopping to buy my toy with my money I could still play with my old toys. What’s the problem with that ? Do you ever get up set of giving up your toys to charity. I guess all I am trying to say is be grateful of what you get and were you are today because you are so lucky.

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  1. I like the ideas in your story, and I think it has a lot of promise! I got a bit confused though, so maybe read your stories out loud to a friend to see if the friend understands and if it’s clear. I think your voice is very relatable though.

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