as i step on the football pitch. the ball was passed to me gently i ran threw a couple of people and i’m in to score a goal “what a start” i said and it just goes wide of the post. a few minutes later the keeper lunched it up the field then i took in down with a world class touch then i passed to my mate on my team then he crossed it in at he headed it just wide of the post again then the ball got passed to me and i scored in the last minute.

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  1. Hi my name is Ryan and I am from Guilderland elementary. I really liked how made your story intense and full of action! But next time make sure you use capitals and punctuation!

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