Handy Creature

Once upon a time, in a city in New Zealand, there was a place called Monster Museum. The people there kept mythical creatures. Including: a Cyclops, a Centaur, a Pegasus, a Minotaur and many more.

One day, when the workers were out looking for more creatures, they saw a fireball in the sky coming towards them. “What is THAT!” one of the workers said. They all jumped into their cars and drove off.

The next day, the workers went back to visit the site. They were amazed by what they saw. “It’s a hand!” said the same worker. “It looks like Donald Trump,” said another.

To be continued in the next story.

3 thoughts on “Handy Creature”

  1. Hi James!

    Your story was really interesting this week. I think your title is really creative, and goes along well with the story. I like how their are three different parts to your story, and they all are pretty important. Overall, great job this week.

    -Maya E.

  2. Hi!
    I enjoyed the part when they first saw the fireball because I liked the way they responded when they saw it. My church dose not have anything like that. I have never saw a church with a hand on or by it so I think that is cool. Next time leave your name and you could also make the story about a type of church next time.

    Happy writing!
    Come look at my blogs!
    From Mariah in Illinois

  3. Dear James,

    I like how well you used the prompt in the story. I also liked how you included dialogue in the story, which made it kind of funny. Overall, your story was great!

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