Holiday Time!

My family and I are all going on holiday to beautiful Hawaii. Right now, I am packing my bag to go there and so far I have packed a couple of clothes. But now what do I need? I could use some gel and a few more hair products but we won't go into detail. 

Now we are in the car, my dad is trying to be funny; I am so embarrassed. 

Now we are on the plane in business class; it is so fun and very expensive. 

Our five-star hotel is the absolute best and the location is priceless!!!!

2 thoughts on “Holiday Time!”

  1. Hi Aston
    I personally love your story because you use paragraph when you change setting. Maybe you could use some rhetorical question and sizzling start. Maybe you can go on my blog and read than comment.
    from say law lah

  2. Hi Aston,
    I enjoyed reading your story.
    This holiday sounds like a dream holiday.
    As for Dads – they can be embarrassing at times but always mean well.
    Good work this week.
    Mrs Boyce

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