Life In The Sky

Their was once a little girl . She had a pet goldfish but it was brown .She lived in a house but one of the thing she most valued was her treehouse. She went up there when she was upset she would go in the treehouse and hide as her parents couldn’t get up the brown ladder then when she came down she flew until she hit the  trampoline.

3 thoughts on “Life In The Sky”

  1. Hi Amy,
    I enjoyed reading your story. Well done.
    I particularly liked the title of your story – Life in the sky/
    I think it’s important for us all to have a special space/place to go to to have a little quiet time. That treehouse sounds like a wonderful place.
    Good work this week.

    Mrs Boyce (Team 100WC)

    1. Hi Amy ,
      good story i love tree houses as well and jumping on the trampiline.

  2. Hi Amy! I really like how you talked about her bond with her treehouse and fish. Did you know that there is a type of fish called beta fish which can be multiple different colors? I really wish I had a tree house but I don’t. Next time, make sure to use the right “there” and make your piece 100 words. Check out my blog!
    Max in Illinois, U.S.A
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