Lost again

Today was probably the worst day I have had since I was born as you don’t now all ready I am 6. The thing I had lost was so preashus,I was furious and frustrated. It was something I chose when I was little and I new I had to find it ,otherwise I would regret it for my hole life even when I’m 60. I looked under my bed,in the bin ,even In ┬ámy mums bed room but no hope was found.So I thought I would give up but no I kept on trying and I think I will find it.

4 thoughts on “Lost again”

  1. Hi Matthew!
    I like how you said that it was the worst day since you were born! One thing you should do is spell words a bit better and add more information about the item. I also probably lost a lot when i was little. I honestly don’t know what it is! Please reply and comment what the object is. would you really still be 60 and regret it?

    Happy writing!
    From Braydon.

  2. Dear Matthew,
    Thanks for taking part in this week’s 100 Word Challenge. I like how you made up a little story about having to look for a lost item as a way to describe your mysterious object. That was an interesting way to write this post. You used some great vocabulary words like precious, furious and frustrated. I could really make a picture in my mind of you searching everywhere in your house for this object and then got upset because you couldn’t find it. I also like that your character isn’t giving up hope even though he is having no luck with his search today. I’m not quite sure what your object is, but hopefully this isn’t a true story and you haven’t lost something special to you. Keep up the good work!
    Mrs. Schmidt (Team 100WC)
    Grade 3 Teacher
    Pennsylvania, USA

    1. Hi there thank you so much for the lovely writing and the incoraging comment I will keep up the good work and try not to lose anything again the object was a special braclet given by my grandad.

  3. Hi there thank you so much for the lovely writing and the incoraging comment I will keep up the good work and try not to lose anything again the object was a special braclet given by my grandad.

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