Magic river

I was in my garden one day, when I heard a sound of water rushing. I looked through the hedge, I saw a river! So I decided to go through. I couldn’t just see a river I could also see some small people. I started running to one of the strange people, when I tripped on a stone and fell into the river! The river’s current was dragging me through so, what lies ahead of me, I didn’t know. I saw a waterfall in the distance, I wished I was out of the river and !!!BOOM!!! I was out of the river.

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  1. Well done on your entry this week James, you’ve done a great job using the prompt.
    I wonder what got you out of the river. It sounds like a some magic force. It’s a good job you got out, it seems like it happened just in time, before you got to the waterfall.
    Keep up the great writing.
    Ms Brennock
    Team 100 w/c

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