Man Hand

Once there was a man called Sam and he was a apple juice and he made the nicest apple juice in the city and his friend was very lucky because he got to try it first.But one day a new person arrived and set up his own apple juice business and every body started buying his apple juice instead of Sam’s.So Sam put a secret  formula in his apple juice even though he didn’t know what it did.Sam only sold one bottle to one person and it turned him into a giant hand man!And he started destroying the whole city!

2 thoughts on “Man Hand”

  1. Hi Hannah,
    I enjoyed reading your story today! I liked how it was about how someone turned into a hand. You can tell that you really like apple juice after you finish your story. Hey, I like apple juice too! It is funny that you made the hand man be a bad guy. But I didn’t really like the end of your story. Next time I think you should make your story have a happy ending. Before I end this comment, I have a question. How did you come up with this story?

    Happy writing!
    Brett in Illinois!
    Make sure to check out my blog!

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