One night in a lonely little house, in a lonely little valley, in a very lonely little country there was one sandwich on a table. It was a battery sandwich. Made with white bread and energetic powder. The battery sandwich was only for robots and this batttery sandwich was especially for one robot named Melbot. Melbot was no ordinary robot. He knew Kung Fu and was a part time pizza delivery driver. Melbot hurried about all day and all night. He was exhausted because he hadn’t eaten his battery sandwich that day. He needed his energetic powder otherwise he would shut down and need to be replaced. Will someone help Melbot?

To be continued.

6 thoughts on “Melbot”

  1. I feel like I could do with a battery sandwich. Brilliant writing! Love the way “lonely” kept being repeated. Fantastic. Was Melbot all on his own? I’m intrigued!

  2. An intriguing story with a good choice of words. It’s quite shocking to eat a battery sandwich each day. Just check for full sentences. Happy writing!
    Steven Hales – Stiffkey, Norfolk, UK – #Team100wc

  3. Hi Daniel,
    I’ m worried about Melbot. Perhaps he won’t survive if someone doesn’ t help him to reach its battery sandwich. If I can do anything, just call me.

  4. Hi Daniel. Melbot sounds like an interesting character! I think a battery sandwich would be a great idea to keep us all going. Great use of descriptive language, too.

    Thank you for sharing your story and keep up the good work!

    Mr Rockey, Team 100 UK

  5. Melbot seems very cool! I like how in your story you made it based off an interesting character and you gave details about him. Also does anyone know about Melbot that can save him? Good job and keep on blogging!

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