Moan, Moan, Moan

If I chased the dog around in the fog………. Moan, Moan, Moan. “Don’t chase the poor thing Millie!” Mum will say.

If I look at a star through one big jar……….. Moan, Moan, Moan “Put that down it could smash!” Mum will shout.

If I slurp and burp at dinner time………… Moan, Moan, Moan. “MILLIEEE!” mum will mime.

But  If I was in charge…………..

I would chase the dog around in the fog,

I would look at a star through one big jar

And I would slurp and burp at dinner time.

My Mum would groan but she wouldn’t moan.

It would be so much better if it was like that,

I don’t know what my Mum is playing at,

But what I do know is that she is doing it for me and my own good!

3 thoughts on “Moan, Moan, Moan”

  1. Dear Francesca,
    Your 100 Word Challenge for this week was fun to read. We all wish we were in charge because we can do so many things that we can not! Anyway, great Job!

  2. Great job Francesca! I liked how you used the prompt. I liked how you switched up the story and gave your own point of view.

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