My Class

Today, I we had, an assembly ,then we sorted out our draws. Next, we did some times tables and spellings, then we went out for lunch. After that, we did some English. Finally I went home with my bestest best friend Hannah it was so fun. The next day, there were some people who were really annoying! Then after that school day when I got home I stole some of my sisters sweets, I said in my head “but where would I hide it all”. When Sienna went to get some of her sweets, she had noticed that someone took lots of her sweets and she shouted “Who has had lots of my sweets!”

2 thoughts on “My Class”

  1. Dear Amelia,

    You did a great job on your story! I really liked it. I loved the part when you described your school day! I would just say that you could maybe work on your punctuation just a bit. I could understand it fairly well, and again, you did an awesome job!

  2. Dear Amelia,
    Your story was great but just remember that after Finally you need a comma. Did your sister find out that you took the sweets? Where did you hide it all?
    From Nia K

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