My secret belonging

<My secret belonging is blue and white you can turn the screen on and fiddle with it and you can play games on it I play plane games on it it,s very important to me so if I loose it I kan aske my my to go on a tracker to track it down you might see me playing on it allot if I’m asked to put it down I put it down other wise I will get a consequence I’ll always want to play on my games but I can’t play on it all the time and in my free time I play on my ps 4 I still me times play whith my brother and his also play whith my nan

3 thoughts on “My secret belonging”

  1. Hi Tobias,
    I really liked your descriptive words. I think your item is and i-pad of a phone. A lot of people have an electronic and don’t want to give it up at times. I saw that some of the words were doubled also some of the words where spelled wrong also your paragraph was one long sentence. What is your favorite game.

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    From, Addison in Illinois.

    1. Hi Tobias,
      I really liked how detailed your explaining was and how you made it really hard to figure out what was your mystery object. I also liked how you said other things you did. But I didn’t know what your object was.

  2. Hi Tobias! I’m Danny. I love how you used good descriptive words in your writing. Keep up the good work!

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