My sick Day

My day began and i was really sick so i tried to stay in bed but my mum would of course drag me out of bed and drag me to school.”Ugghhh >.<” I mumbled as i walked around.

2 thoughts on “My sick Day”

  1. Max that story was really good. But you did need your I to be a capital because I could only see one that was a capital letter and three other were not capitals. Where it says you felt sick it says i was really sick so tired to stay in bed. You need a and in between sick and so. Except for that the story was brilliant!

    1. Amelia, thanks for the brilliant comment, But this story was unfinished and I might delete it. Sorry -Max

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