planes of world war 2 Copy

One day Tims farther went to war he flew the flying fortress with his co pilot Fill four spitfires gaurding  the plane that Tims dad was in the plane and heading out to the vilent war back at the house tim and his mum were eating lunch then Tim asked is dad going to be alright yes mum said he will be alright come on let’s have some fun and play some games

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  1. Some great word choices like violent, but it was hard to read because it needed more full stops. I really liked the specific World War II details like Spitfires.

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