planes of world war 2

One day Tims farther went to war he flew the flying fortress with his co pilot Fill four spitfires gaurding¬† the plane that Tims dad was in the plane and heading out to the vilent war back at the house tim and his mum were eating lunch then Tim asked is dad going to be alright yes mum said he will be alright come on let’s have some fun and play some games

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  1. Dear Tobias,

    I like how well you used dialogue in the story. I also liked how you said what type of plane Tim’s dad flew. I would suggest adding more capitalisation and punctuation. Overall, your story was great!

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