Prison

On one cold windy night a young boy called Jack was stuck in prison….

he wanted to get out the prison. He was quick but he didn’t make any  progress.today was the day I should escape hahahahahahahaahah!!!! ” could you be quite”said my inmate . Time to make my great escape I will dig with a spoon! so i did an it was the best escape ever no gards saw i ran and ran untile i found a jungle  and made a tree house and i lived the for the rest of my hole life eating brokile and it was nice. 

The End

8 thoughts on “Prison”

  1. Nice use of descriptive language and using punctuation when it is needed. I like that you are separated your story into two paragraphs instead of just a big, long story. Nice job!

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