Queen Ant

Ever since I was little, I always have been fascinated by ants. Yes ants, you heard me right! They are interesting, tiny insects. I have an ant kit, called AntWorld, it is by Nick Baker. I ordered a queen off of AntKit.UK. She was free but the postage was £5.95! After school on Wednesday, I asked my Mum: “When did it arrive?” I asked. “She came today, in a test tub!” Explained my Mum. I got so excited, so as soon as I got home I grabbed the tube. My mum said “You have to clean your room before you touch them!”…

3 thoughts on “Queen Ant”

  1. Hi Chloe!

    I liked your story a lot! I thought it was a really imaginative way of using the prompt, and definitely quite a original thing to write about.

    I also really liked your use of punctuation such as speech marks (“”) , ellipses (…) and exclamation marks (!).

    I wonder how the Queen is doing, and if she has a nice big colony of ants to look after her! I study biology so I have learnt quite a lot about ants, they live very interesting lives. Did you know that some ants farm other insects known as aphids for their milk? its a little bit like how we keep cows for milk! Ants are certainly a lot more clever than most people give them credit for!

    By the way, do you mean test tube instead of test “tub”?

    Keep on writing!

    Ana, Team100wc

    Oxford, England

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