Today i woke up in my bed and thought the same thought, what would happen if i ate my goldfishes food? Of course i wouldn’t eat goldfish food but i just thought about it. But today is the day i would do it so i got out of bed and slowly crept down the stairs and i opened the lid of the can and slowly putĀ  it into my mouth… But my mum saw me and grab the can out of my hands. “TIMMY WHAT WERE YOU THINKING?!?!?!?!, YOU COULD OF KILLED YOUR SELF!!!!!!!”. After that, i was grounded for 3 weeks and wasn’t allowed to feed my own goldfish. After 3 weeks, my mum spoiled it all and put the fish food out of reach, but i had a plan! At 1:00 AM i woke up before morning time and i went down stairs and got a brown ladder out of the basement and didn’t make a sound. I leaned the ladder on the kitchen counter and climbed up and swiped the fish food off the top cupboard. Now instead of slowly pouring it into my mouth i did it quickly. I felt the fish food in my mouth, it was crunchy and tasted weird, and then i swallowed it. I waited a few seconds and it didn’t kill me so i went back to bed clearing up and put the fish food back were it was. When i closed my eyes……. They opened back up and i couldn’t see my bedroom, I can only see rainbows. Suddenly i started to fly and flew down the rainbow hole………………………………………NOW EVERYTHING WAS GOING CRAZY I CAN SEE MY MUM AS A COW AND MY FISH AS A PLANET AND DANCING ROBOTS AND AND AND SO MUCH RAINBOWSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS AND LOTS OF FISH AND FISH FOOD AND MY DAD AS SATURN AND MUSTERED WITH FLYING HOTDOGS AND CAKES AND CAKES AND CAKES AND CAKES AND CAKES AND CAKES AND ALL MY SCHOOL FRIENDS BARFING RAINBOWWWWWWWWSSSSSSSSSS AND MY TEACHER WEARING RAINBOW PJS AND FLYING RAINBOW WORDS AND… *Mean while in reality* AJANCAKCXNJWLLNJDCILEWNUC *Mean while in the rainbow world* WOOWOWOWOWOWOOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOOWOWOOWOWOWOOWOWOWOOWOWOWOOWOWOOWO……… uuuggghhh my head… What happened? *Looks at clock* its only 6 o’clock… Ive been out for 5 hours and my mum isn’t even up yet…..


4 thoughts on “My Rainbow Trip ADVENTUREEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!”

  1. Nice story Max I loved the bit when you put, to be continued or concluded

    From Nicola M

  2. Hi Max I love it when you write long story’s especially this story but I think you could add some more adjectives

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