Raniy day

It had been raining all morning the sky was dark and grey and the mood in the house dull as well. The rain covered the ground and would be amazing for jumping in ,you could almost swim in it. The more it rained the deeper the puddles got,and they got very deep. Ruby’s mum decided to go to the park they all thought it was a great idea and got in the car. They bought there wellies so the could splash around in the puddles by the lake. When they got home Ruby thought it was the best day ever.

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  1. I like the use of descriptive words in the first sentence to describe the morning sky! You also paint an image with the rain and the fact you could swim in it. Sounds like a fun play date splashing around in puddles!

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