The red arrows part 1

Once me and my sister Bella were sit out side of our house and then we heard a loud noise from in front of us and in the distance.saw nine jets in streamline red and then we realised they weren’t just any red jet they were the red arrrows  we waved to them and the waved with there planes. And we lived right next to there base and we got on. of there phone number and we asked them to do a display over our house in the beginning the did a loop the loop and then they went into.

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  1. Dear Tobias,

    I like how well you used the prompt in the story. I also liked how well you described the things in the story. Overall, your story was great!

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