Sports Day Disaster

Hello,today is sports day and I am in the running race in the afternoon.So i am walking to school  and we are nearly there. I always get bored on the way to school  and  I  meet my friends half way at Tesco, well most of the time.Today I got really bored. I saw a anoying boy that I was going to race so I said to him dose he want a race and he said yes.My friend said 3 2 1 GO and I thought, “well what a start” until he pushed me over and I broke my leg and I could’t race.

2 thoughts on “Sports Day Disaster”

  1. Hi, this is Kate from Guilderland, NY. I love the way you elaborated! I think you could use more action and explaining, but with that, this piece would be perfect!

    -Kate

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