Stick Man

One day, as my clan walked through the park we found a… HUMAN! It was old and wrinkly, it needed a baby stick to use it’s… Legs, is that what they’re called? I shrunk to meet the size of a ant. As I walked closer, I leapt onto it’s… Body? I was known for my sneakiness, so this was easy for me. I climbed onto the baby stick and pushed against it with all my might. It fell to the ground, along with the human! I quickly hopped away, and shrunk the baby stick to the size of me. “Here Smudge, here Smudge!” I cried as the little squirrel sat down in front of me. Me and the baby stick shuffled onto Smudge’s back. We flew through the wind, the baby stick cried with laughter as she fell backwards! Suddenly Smudge stopped and paused. I looked beside her head and I saw… My Dad! “Dad!” I screeched, as I leaped off Smudge’s back. My father ran forward, he was huge. I rose from my tiny appearance and hugged my Dad. My Mum was next to him looking disgusted. She wasn’t always nice. I went to hug my Mum, but she turned her head away from me! I said goodbye to everyone and hopped onto Smudge and we rode into the sunset. They all waved back, so did I.

2 thoughts on “Stick Man”

  1. Hi Chloe! I really liked your story, and how you used the dots to show that you character was unsure about the human! Anyways, I can’t really find any errors or mistakes, so…. good job! You did marvelous!

  2. Nice job Chloe! This post was so funny! I like how you were the stick men point of view! Overall nice job!

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