SUMMER IN NEW YORK!

”Finally,the summer holidays” I said. We were heading to New York. After, a very long flight we finally arrived. We got to are hotel and unpacked our stuff and went for a stroll. When we were walking past the hotel I saw the biggest statue, it was massive.It was like a well, it was so cool Iย  stood in front and we took lots off nice pictures. We had been in New York for two weeks and my parents said I could go out by myself andย  lost my way…
THE END

6 thoughts on “SUMMER IN NEW YORK!”

  1. Hi Poppy, your lucky New York for two whole weeks!.Did you find your way back to your family?.

  2. Hey Poppy,great story,that happened to me when I was lost in Manchester when I was a baby my ma left me outside in a buggy and finally she found me! That was a fantastic story!

    from Reena CJS

  3. Hey Pops! Fantastic story, I loved the suspense and mystery at the end. I would only suggest you change the font, it sort of makes the writing look shorter, (I’m not a fan of short pieces of writing). Also maybe add some more description! Great Story by the way! ๐Ÿ™‚

    Chloe, CJS ๐Ÿ™‚

  4. Hi Chloe, thanks for the comment and thank you for the tip,next time I write a story I will remember that and yes I did find my way home !

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