The Bad Day!!!

It was a lovly, sunny day and Molly was having a garden party all her friends were coming any minite  now. Molly heard a nock on the door it was her friends Mia and Milena. Soon all her friends were in her garden.they played tag and hide and seek. Then they had some party food and cleared every thing away. But                    then the wheather changed dramatically. It started raining really heavily when they were about to do the cake

2 thoughts on “The Bad Day!!!”

  1. Hi Milena,
    I started reading your writing and I loved it. You have described it really well and put in everything I could think of. I really enjoyed reading it. Well done, next time to improve you could work on your spelling. Other than that it was pretty good.
    From Olivia
    At Friday Bridge Primary School

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