THE BIG FINGER

Once, I went on a dog walk. The one thing I hated  was going on a walk by myself especially on this dog walk. I SAW THE WORLDS  MASIVE HAND I jumped out of my skin. I didn’t finish the dog walk I ran home and told my told my mum all about it. But my mum did not believe   me so I got in so much trouble. My step dad was the strictest  dad on earth  when he found that I did not walk the dogs had made a mess over the the floor he went ballistic……

 

4 thoughts on “THE BIG FINGER”

  1. Hi Poppy, your story is intense and moves quickly. If I were that character I would run, scream, and cry.
    It would be scary walking a dog on a normal day and then seeing that. do you like dogs or cats better? I like dogs. whats was your favorite prompt. That would stink getting in trouble. I loved your story.
    from Cecilia in Illinois
    https://kidblog.org

    1. Thank you for the comment Cecilia I like dogs better just because I have two dogs and I’m allergic to cat.

    2. Thank you for the comment Cecilia I like dogs better just because I have two dogs and I’m allergic to cats.

  2. Hello Poppy! I like dogs but a little bit allergic to dogs but I will run away as well.
    Great spellings and cool punctuation!

    Well done!

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