The Brown Goldfish

One day I was fishing in my local lake and I saw a fish at first I thought it was a goldfish but it was brown and swimming very slowly and then it just zoomed of and it looked like it flew. And because it was getting late I went home and on the way I saw a man up a ladder and the ladder was shaking so I shouted”Hey your ladder is shaking”and he said”I don’t care” so I just carried on walking home and when I got there there was a lovely dinner on the table.

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One thought on “The Brown Goldfish”

  1. Lennon,

    Great job on your post. When you exclaimed how fast the fish swam I thought. Wow! That is a fast fish. Also I liked how you used chronological order in your writing.

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