The cake

In a little village near town lived a girl called lily she loved cakes. One day she was mixing up the cake mixture for her cake. She poured it into a tin which she put in the oven to cook.When it came out of oven she noticed that it was huge. It was bigger than big. Lily iced the cake with a nice green minty flavour of icing on the top. After lily placed a pink daffodil on the top of the huge cake she sat down with her mum, dad and her sister.A nd the huge cake of corse.

2 thoughts on “The cake”

  1. Some nice ideas. You used the prompt well. Remember, capitals for names!
    Mr. M. (Team 100WC)
    Bedfordshire, UK

  2. Hey,
    I think you had a good story. It had some good punctuation, correct spelling and was fun to read. As I finished reading I realised that you forgot to add in the word bridge!

    Great job!
    Yours sincerely, Lilly

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