The dancing goldfish

Once there was a girl called Ella. She had a dancing goldfish. She always feeds the goldfish brown fish food. She feeds the goldfish slowly because if she feeds the him too fast it will make him dance too quickly.  One day  the goldfish flew out of its bowl because he had been fed too fast. Dad had to get a ladder to get the fish down from the top shelf of our cupboard. The fish was never quite the same again after this experience in stead of swimming in circles he now swims in squares which means he bumps into the side of his bowl.

4 thoughts on “The dancing goldfish”

  1. Hi Adam
    Your story is enjoyable I like the fact that the goldfish can dance.
    But I don`t understand the part of “she feeds the him too fast”.
    Good job.

  2. Hi Adam
    i really like how the goldfish can dance but i found really funny that he bumps into the side of his bowl

  3. Hi Adam! I really liked your piece. The thing I liked about it was that you said “she feeds the goldfish slowly because if she feeds the him too fast it will make him dance too quickly”. Do you have a goldfish or do you know the goldfish you eat? I used to have a goldfish but then it died. The US is really great I live in Illinois it snows there and gets really warm. My mom is from the UK. I really enjoyed your piece a lot.

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