The day in the life of me

The first thing I do is check on Tom. Then I get dressed. After that I go down stairs and eat my breakfast. Then I go brush my teeth. After I brush my teeth I get ready to go to school. When I get to school I but my bike in the shed and go to the front  the school to wait for the doors to open. When it’s break time I go play with my friends. At the  end of school I biked home and jumped on the couch and watch tv pes I do this most of the time

One thought on “The day in the life of me”

  1. Dear Wyatt,
    I thought your story was good but you should work on you punctuation and use other punctuation like commas and not always full stops.

    From Ma Myat Way

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