The Egg Team!

On Friday, the egg team decided to go to Australia. They always wanted to go to Australia and now they are. Ben really wanted to be in charge of the tickets and he was because he kept on moaning and every one got annoyed so they shouted “yes”. Hannah was in charge of the passports and Chloe was in charge of the sweets for the plain. Freddie took us to the airport in his car. I was in charge of booking the plain seats and the hotel room. When we got to the plain Ben couldn’t find the tickets in his bag Chloe said” But if I was in charge they wouldn’t have been lost.

One thought on “The Egg Team!”

  1. Hi Amelia! Nice writing! I really liked how each character in the story had a job to do. It helped make the story flow more easily.

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