The epic fall

One day there was a man walking his dog they went to a place where there was loads of space for the dog to run around and stretch his little legs they had found a really good place for them to have a walk and take the dog for a walk when they had let Matthew the dog the dog of the lead and he went like a bird that was getting chased by a bird he ran so fast he did not recanise that there was a tree in front of him coming to wards him and he jumped into a lake to have a swim he tried to get Matthew out but he slipped and went head first in the lake

8 thoughts on “The epic fall”

  1. Dear Alfie,
    I really enjoyed reading your story. You really added a lot of good adjectives in your story. You also included some good suspense near the end. Keep it up!
    From, Jocelyn C.

  2. Hi! I am a fan of what you have done this week. I hope the man was ok. I can’t wait to see what you do next week!

  3. Hi! I like what you did for the promt. I can only wonder what else would have been put if there was no word limit. I can not wait to see what you will do for next weeks prompt!

  4. hi I’m Matthew,I’m from Mrs.Wazlo’s class and I like how you described the dog and how you named it Matthew.Nice story!

  5. Hi, i loved your story but next time just remember to add your punctuation. cant wait to read your next story! 🙂

  6. Hi I’m Matthew I like how you used a lot of detail and action in your story.
    Good Job!

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