One day there was a man walking his dog they went to a place where there was loads of space for the dog to run around and stretch his little legs they had found a really good place for them to have a walk and take the dog for a walk when they had let Matthew the dog the dog of the lead and he went like a bird that was getting chased by a bird he ran so fast he did not recanise that there was a tree in front of him coming to wards him and he jumped into a lake to have a swim he tried to get Matthew out but he slipped and went head first in the lake
Hi Alfie,
I enjoyed reading your story. Well done.
Oh dear – I hope the man was alright. The things we do for our dogs!
Good work this week.
Mrs. Boyce (Team 100WC)
Cork.
Ireland
https://mrsboycesclass.100wc.net/
Thanks for the comment that you have left me i will enjoy reading your classes storys
Dear Alfie,
I really enjoyed reading your story. You really added a lot of good adjectives in your story. You also included some good suspense near the end. Keep it up!
From, Jocelyn C.
Hi! I am a fan of what you have done this week. I hope the man was ok. I can’t wait to see what you do next week!
Hi! I like what you did for the promt. I can only wonder what else would have been put if there was no word limit. I can not wait to see what you will do for next weeks prompt!
hi I’m Matthew,I’m from Mrs.Wazlo’s class and I like how you described the dog and how you named it Matthew.Nice story!
Hi, i loved your story but next time just remember to add your punctuation. cant wait to read your next story! 🙂
Hi I’m Matthew I like how you used a lot of detail and action in your story.
Good Job!