It all started when Amy and Annabel where very little about 2 there where thing to do was dressing up .But when they where grown up guess what they wanted to be when they where grow up they wanted to be a fashion disener. Oh no they went any fashion disener they made dresses pretty dresses . They went any old dresses oh on the mitre it was shimmy ,glittery,sparkly. With pink roses and a purple ribbon with a bow on it .Amy and Annabel tried it on first thing they a dordit they danced ,danced,danced,danced,danced,danced,danced all night
That story was very good but just remember your capital letars and full stops
Great work you could put some more detail in your work.