The Fighting Camp

One evening my mum found a camp and she thought it would be good for me jack. I am a big boy and I have not  been to a camp yet  and I thought it would be fun . We went the next morning and the entrance said fighting camp I and mum said “this is not the camp I booked ” but lets try it and see she dropped me of and said”seems good”and I started walking I had walked about 20 mins and I saw a group of people and didn’t look real and that was because they weren’t. But I got to sleep and didn’t Like so I didn’t go the next day.

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2 thoughts on “The Fighting Camp”

  1. You put a lot of adjectives in your story. I liked how you described how you felt about the camp. I don’t think I would like that camp either.

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