The Goldfish

Once there was this brown coloured goldfish and this goldfish was no ordinary goldfish she could climb up a ladder and one day she flew through the air and that meant she learnt a new trick !.If i never said the goldfish’s name was Pepper.When Pepper is upset she paddles away slowly.Pepper has talent !

2 thoughts on “The Goldfish”

  1. Hi Amelia
    I think that you did a great job making this story! One thing that I didn’t understand was the end when you said “If i never said the goldfish’s name was Pepper. When Pepper is upset she paddles away slowly. Pepper has talent!” But over all it was really great! Did you know that when I was little I had 2 catfish and 2 other fish, I don’t remember what the other 2 fish were called.

    Kele-De in Illinois

  2. Good job! I like the way you used the prompt in your story. Your story is fun to read and imagine what if a real goldfish could climb and fly through the air. Do not forget that an i is capital when referring to yourself. Keep up the good work!

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