The Missing Kitten

Scarlett lost her cat Ginger. Ginger was running around the park she thought what should I do now I’m lost I think I should run to the pet shop. Scarlett was in her room crying. Emma found me and took me to the pet shop I thought Scarlett would find me but she didnt find me. Then Scaletts mum found Ginger. Ginger was so happy to be home. Scarlett was so happy to see Ginger. They were both so happy to see Ginger. Ginger was hurt she had cut her leg. She went to the vet. She hade broke her leg.

3 thoughts on “The Missing Kitten”

  1. To Mia,

    you should check your punctuation and put more commas instead of full stops but overall it was an amazing story.

    From ma myat way

  2. Hi Mai
    your story was a little confusing because i didn’t know which character you were. maybe you could use some rhetorical question but overall your story was amazing. Maybe if you have time you could come and comment on my story.
    from say law lah

  3. Hi Mia,
    I was a little bit confused because I didn’t know which character was talking but overall your story was amazing I think you should have made longer sentence and check your punctuation and put more commas instead of full stops but keep on writing great stories like that come and visit my blog onhttps://jehehmoo67nps.edublogs.org thanks
    By Jeh eh moo

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