The Plate

In the beginning, I was having my  breakfast and I had bacon and eggs with my family and after that we went to town and sore some china plates. So we bought them for £34  it was a good deal. At lunch we used the new plates that we bought. For dinner we had  a Sunday roast and after that we went to bed. The next day we had breakfast and went to the garden centre and my sister came to have a cake. Then we went to have dinner with the new plates but for some risen all of them were gone!


3 thoughts on “The Plate”

  1. Hi Sam
    So wherever have those plates gone? This could lead to the next piece of writing!
    Just be careful with ‘sore’ – you meant ‘saw’. Also there are some commas missing around phrases – check as you read your work through.
    Keep writing!
    Steven Hales – Stiffkey, Norfolk, England, UK – #Team100WC

  2. Did the rabbits do this or a mysterious enemy? Nice job using a cliffhanger. It seems like a lot of people are using cliffhangers in their stories. It makes the stories a lot more interesting!

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