The sloppy doggy

 

they was once a dog called  sloppy doggy  he lived in a bog  every  one loved him . Sloppy doggy always wearing  sun glasses . One day he met  a girl dog  and had baby doggy  but his wife was really tidy. she told him to tidy up  and that was that but sloppy doggy did not tidy up his bog.So sloppy doggy's wife told him to tidy up his bog but sloppy doggy did not tidy up his bog. so she ran away! She was really angry and took her child.Slopppy doggy was sad and burried himself in his bog never to be seen again

5 thoughts on “The sloppy doggy”

  1. Very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  2. William, your story was really creative. It was a great idea to write how the girl dog repeatedly told Sloppy Doggy to tidy his bog, because it showed how desperate she was. Good work!

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