The Spillage.

I was walking to school and I saw an old house with scaffolding around it. I was quite curious about what was going on and there was builders where around it. was there he told me there was a leak with cream. egg chocolate, it was very peculiar. We was all confused at that moment and the owner and some explaining to do. AkA stealing. when I got to school I told all my friends and my friends told his friends and so on. eventually the whole school knew every one wanted to walk home, going past the spillage that had been made

5 thoughts on “The Spillage.”

  1. Dear Aston

    Great and descriptive like all the others. I don’t have much to say but I think what I said first was ok. Goodbye

    From Tyree

  2. I find your story very interesting and I like how you got straight into the story! I also like how the story was nice and short because if you have a really long story it tends to bore people…well done! 🙂 🙂 🙂

  3. Dear Aston,

    I personally liked you story,good job. But you could improve on your full stops and punctuation,but overall it was an amazing story.

    From Ma Myat Way

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