The stables

As I walked into  the house there was a big lime green clock. When I went into the  barn to get  My horse Bella and I saw a rat run across the floor. Bella got so excitedly she ran away she ran to the shop called overboard. I found her we golloped  back to the stables. We got there in time for the lesson I had to jump on Charlie he was really good we did jumping he’s the best jumper ever. He was in the field when he jumped jumped out the filed he golloped around the huge files.

 

One thought on “The stables”

  1. It’s a very fluent story Mia .Maybe some more punctuation next time .

    By Finley and Rudy frome somerset

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