The Story Of My Goldfish

One day a old man saw that his goldfish was slowly turning brown. He didn’t want to think about it as his wife died last week. His grandaughter Lucy asked him if she could use a ladder to get up on top of the roof and do some gym.He said no as he couldn’t bear to lose another one. Finally the old man took his goldfish to the vets. The vet told him that his goldfish was dead. As the old man walked out of the vets a bird flew over his head. He was so sad.

5 thoughts on “The Story Of My Goldfish”

  1. Well done on your story this week Natalie. It’s quite sad, but you’ve written it very nicely.
    I hope the old man will have many happy days with his grand daughter.
    Ms Brennock
    Team 100 wc
    Dublin
    Ireland

  2. Natalie that was cool, I like your sadness it made me laugh.

    From Nicola M

  3. I think you did good on the part where it said “He said no as he couldn’t bear to lose another one.” I also liked that you put feelings.

  4. Natalie,

    Great job on your post I really liked your vivid vocabulary and how you expressed how sad the old man was.

  5. Hello, Natalie. Your story was very sad but clearly explained all of the characters’ feelings. The way you wrote “He didn’t want to think about it as his wife died last week” deeply expressed the old man’s grief. Excellent job!

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