The Terrible Idea!!

Hi I’m Gru I am a villain one day I went on vacation and I have these little helpers called minions and I let one of them called Bob definitely not in charge cause he asked me,”What if I was in charge.”             But instead I let Kevin be in charge he was a clever boy but this suprised me all he did was either sleep or party so instead of carrying on my vacation I had go back and stay with the minions. I had to tell Kevin off and  but I felt sad for him because my  mom  when I was little she used to tell me off just like I did to Kevin and it was the end of the day goodnight.

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  1. Hello Nika, you have raised some important issues in your story such as, consequences of choices you make, the impact of being “told off”. Missing full stops made your story a little bit difficult to read but you were still able to show some emotion in your story.

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