The very tall tree

“Hi my name is Nia, I’ve come to say that I’m stuck up a tree, I know it is weird but here how it goes”.

I was in the living room and my dad said to come out side to climb a tree, it was weird why my dad would say that, I went out side and said ” I’m going to climb the tree”  

I looked at the bird nest and then I heard my dad say ” How did she get up there”. 

I felt weird now I was up a tree trying to get down but it was cool up here, then my sister came and got me down, but she said It was her magic,( all I did was jump). 

When I jumped I felt like I was flying WEEEEE”. 

2 thoughts on “The very tall tree”

  1. Hi Nicola,

    Great story! I liked the way you structured it into paragraphs. It helped the story flow really well. Good use of dialogue- you used just the right amount. I especially liked the part at the end when Nia said “WEEEEE”. I used to love climbing trees when I was younger. It can be scary if you get stuck though so don’t climb to high. Keep up the good work.

    Michael (Team 100wc), Derbyshire, UK.

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